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1、四年之约,与你相伴大学四级作文范文(一)Fire Prevention on Campus1.前段时间校园火灾频发,造成生命和财产损失2.分析火灾发生的原因3.作为学生,如何预防校园火灾发生审题概述这是一分析火灾原因和如何预防火灾为中心的文章,撰写时重点即在于此。开篇综述校园火灾频发情形及造成的生命和财产损失,然后说明火灾原因,最后提出可能的火灾预防措施。第一段,主要概述;第二段,说明原因;第三段,详细论述措施。【范文】Fire Prevention on Campus People are alarmed by the succession of campus fires in recent
2、 years. In each of these accidents, heavy casualties were reported houses were burned down, students lost their lives, and properties were damaged. Faced with such a chilling fact, people keep asking, “What on earth results in these repeated tragedies?” A brief survey of them reveals that human fact
3、ors still prove to be the leading causes. For example, three of these fires were caused by the students use of electric water-heaters. As students often leave the heaters unattended, the risks are rather high should the water in the bottle boil dry while no one is around to turn off the power. In ot
4、her cases, fires were also caused by stoves, candles, cigarette butts, etc. Since most of these disasters could have been prevented if proper precautions had been taken, students should be better educated on the importance and measures of fire control. The following three reminders are of particular
5、 importance for us students: First, learn how to use a fire extinguisher. Second, double-check candles, heaters, stoves and other electric appliances, and make sure there are no open flames before leaving rooms. Lastly, do not smoke in the dorm.第一段思路点评:概述并引入下文语言点提示:(1)此句What on earth results in thes
6、e repeated tragedies? 常可作为过渡句,引出下文(2)注意描述有关火灾客观事实,多使用被动语态,如are alarmed by,were reported,were burned down,were damaged,Faced with。第二段思路点评:论述火灾的主要原因是使用电热水器,还有造成火灾的次要原因是实用电炉、蜡烛和乱扔烟蒂语言点提示:electric water-heaters电热水器第三段思路点评:详述预防火灾的三点措施,注意使用连接词语first, second, lastly。语言点提示:take precautions采取预防措施fire extingu
7、isher灭火器(二)Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts1. 校园盗窃案件时有发生2. 物品被盗的原因3. 学生如何加强防盗意识审题概述这是一篇论述校园物品被盗和加强防盗意识的文章。第一段,主要陈述校园盗窃案件发生的情况。第二段,主要分析校园物品被盗的原因。第三段,主要阐述学生怎样增强防盗意识。【范文】Enhance Awareness to Guard against Campus Thefts “If you dont want to wake up and find you have no pants to wear, you
8、d better put them on in sleep,” goes a popular joke among students. Obviously, campus thefts have become increasingly annoying as they occur far more often than before. And it seems that the thieves are less choosy these days, with their targets ranging widely from bikes, cell phones, purses, pre-pa
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